site critique anyone?

[dajm]

Just have a look and give me ideas for improvements, thanks.

http://sexstarvedmoms.adultbouncer.com/

[babydred]

Just have a look and give me ideas for improvements, thanks.

http://sexstarvedmoms.adultbouncer.com/

Pretty good design...but the pics need to be worked on...sharpened and brightened are the main two fixes needed.

Myself, i'd go as far as color-balancing and color saturation...but that's just me. :wink:

[Kerubo]

a good advice... export your buttons to gif-format... the pics will look better (especially with the red background... if you look pretty closely, you will notice the 'dirty' pixels) + they will be smaller... :)


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[D-XXX]

yup those are good tips. knowing when to use gif vs jpgs is important, especially when you are trying to match background colors or transparent gifs.

maybe get a stylesheet going, sometimes you can get away with text instead of graphics - especially when you're doing a graphic with just text and nothing special that html cant do.

maybe some animation - an animated gif join button or hover link of html text.

not sure, i could go on, but sometimes when you give suggestions you tend to just tell people how you want a site designed

[dajm]

a good advice... export your buttons to gif-format... the pics will look better (especially with the red background... if you look pretty closely, you will notice the 'dirty' pixels) + they will be smaller... :)


Cpt

Holy crap! your right, didn't notice that, will fix right away. Thanks.

Thanks for the other great advice too d-xxx and babydred =)

Much appreciated.

[Aussiemade]

Just have a look and give me ideas for improvements, thanks.

http://sexstarvedmoms.adultbouncer.com/

I agree with the other Blokes, your "Download this Movie" graphic is a bit ordinary. Looks a bit Skewed to me too? (it's not, just looks that way. Must be an Optical Illusion).

I presume the layout is just for design purposes and you're going to add Title 18, e-mail, etc.

I'd be giving that "Click here for instant access" one the flick too. Seems a bit unwarranted. Love the "100's of Sites" one but, I would make it just 19.95 and forget the Month bit. (I know what you mean, you know what you mean, but I'm not sure a potential Member will).

I'm a bit Anal, so I wouldn't be using too many different Fonts and Colours. Settle on a Font, and Colour Scheme. The Yellow makes a good contrast against the Red.

[dajm]

Just have a look and give me ideas for improvements, thanks.

http://sexstarvedmoms.adultbouncer.com/

I agree with the other Blokes, your "Download this Movie" graphic is a bit ordinary. Looks a bit Skewed to me too? (it's not, just looks that way. Must be an Optical Illusion).

I presume the layout is just for design purposes and you're going to add Title 18, e-mail, etc.

I'd be giving that "Click here for instant access" one the flick too. Seems a bit unwarranted. Love the "100's of Sites" one but, I would make it just 19.95 and forget the Month bit. (I know what you mean, you know what you mean, but I'm not sure a potential Member will).

I'm a bit Anal, so I wouldn't be using too many different Fonts and Colours. Settle on a Font, and Colour Scheme. The Yellow makes a good contrast against the Red.

Thanks for the suggestions, however this is my final design, and it will pretty much look like this, im not going to add my email to the preview area, since I dont see why i should, and it might be picked up by spambots, but however i should add the Title 18 thingie, is this a requirement? Last time i checked, it wasnt, it was just suggested.

[Aussiemade]

Thanks for the suggestions, however this is my final design, and it will pretty much look like this, im not going to add my email to the preview area, since I dont see why i should, and it might be picked up by spambots, but however i should add the Title 18 thingie, is this a requirement? Last time i checked, it wasnt, it was just suggested.

Title 18 is Mandatory. Don't go looking for it on AB though it's not necessarily an AB requirement, however, it is LAW.

Your call on the e-mail, but I thought that was an AB rquirement? There are ways and means around the e-mail viruses, which spoof your e-mail address.

[babydred]

Thanks for the suggestions, however this is my final design, and it will pretty much look like this, im not going to add my email to the preview area, since I dont see why i should, and it might be picked up by spambots, but however i should add the Title 18 thingie, is this a requirement? Last time i checked, it wasnt, it was just suggested.

Title 18 is Mandatory. Don't go looking for it on AB though it's not necessarily an AB requirement, however, it is LAW.

Your call on the e-mail, but I thought that was an AB rquirement? There are ways and means around the e-mail viruses, which spoof your e-mail address.

Like a javascript version to put up your email...like on my sites. :wink:

[dajm]

Thanks for the suggestions, however this is my final design, and it will pretty much look like this, im not going to add my email to the preview area, since I dont see why i should, and it might be picked up by spambots, but however i should add the Title 18 thingie, is this a requirement? Last time i checked, it wasnt, it was just suggested.

Title 18 is Mandatory. Don't go looking for it on AB though it's not necessarily an AB requirement, however, it is LAW.

Your call on the e-mail, but I thought that was an AB rquirement? There are ways and means around the e-mail viruses, which spoof your e-mail address.

Its only required to have your email up in the members section, but i guess i could put up an e-mail in the preview area also, and as babydred mentioned i can use the java function to protect it, or something else.

Gonna look that 18 thingie up at once. Thanks again.

[babydred]

Thanks for the suggestions, however this is my final design, and it will pretty much look like this, im not going to add my email to the preview area, since I dont see why i should, and it might be picked up by spambots, but however i should add the Title 18 thingie, is this a requirement? Last time i checked, it wasnt, it was just suggested.

Title 18 is Mandatory. Don't go looking for it on AB though it's not necessarily an AB requirement, however, it is LAW.

Your call on the e-mail, but I thought that was an AB rquirement? There are ways and means around the e-mail viruses, which spoof your e-mail address.

Its only required to have your email up in the members section, but i guess i could put up an e-mail in the preview area also, and as babydred mentioned i can use the java function to protect it, or something else.

Gonna look that 18 thingie up at once. Thanks again.

My "18 thingie" is linked to ABs movie compliance page...seeing that i'm using their content. :wink:

[dajm]

Thanks for the suggestions, however this is my final design, and it will pretty much look like this, im not going to add my email to the preview area, since I dont see why i should, and it might be picked up by spambots, but however i should add the Title 18 thingie, is this a requirement? Last time i checked, it wasnt, it was just suggested.

Title 18 is Mandatory. Don't go looking for it on AB though it's not necessarily an AB requirement, however, it is LAW.

Your call on the e-mail, but I thought that was an AB rquirement? There are ways and means around the e-mail viruses, which spoof your e-mail address.

Its only required to have your email up in the members section, but i guess i could put up an e-mail in the preview area also, and as babydred mentioned i can use the java function to protect it, or something else.

Gonna look that 18 thingie up at once. Thanks again.

My "18 thingie" is linked to ABs movie compliance page...seeing that i'm using their content. :wink:

That sounds pretty reasonable, think i might do the same.

[babydred]

My "18 thingie" is linked to ABs movie compliance page...seeing that i'm using their content. :wink:

That sounds pretty reasonable, think i might do the same.

here...copy and paste my statement to your site:

This product is exclusively for persons over 18 years of age. The sale or transfer of this material to minors is strictly prohibited.

All content, within the pages of (yoursitename), is fully compliant with US Code, Title 18, Section 2257 (US Label Law). Click HERE (http://www.adultbouncer.com/usc2257.php) for details. All content is fully licensed for use on this website. Copyrights held by their respective owners. All models are 18 years of age or older.

This statement along with the 2257 (or "18 thingie") link should pretty much cover your bases. (insert breaks where needed) :wink:

[dajm]

My "18 thingie" is linked to ABs movie compliance page...seeing that i'm using their content. :wink:

That sounds pretty reasonable, think i might do the same.

here...copy and paste my statement to your site:

This product is exclusively for persons over 18 years of age. The sale or transfer of this material to minors is strictly prohibited.

All content, within the pages of (yoursitename), is fully compliant with US Code, Title 18, Section 2257 (US Label Law). Click HERE (http://www.adultbouncer.com/usc2257.php) for details. All content is fully licensed for use on this website. Copyrights held by their respective owners. All models are 18 years of age or older.

This statement along with the 2257 (or "18 thingie") link should pretty much cover your bases. (insert breaks where needed) :wink:

Thanks mate, were just about to ask if i could copy those lines from your site ;)

Thanks again.

[babydred]

My "18 thingie" is linked to ABs movie compliance page...seeing that i'm using their content. :wink:

That sounds pretty reasonable, think i might do the same.

here...copy and paste my statement to your site:

This product is exclusively for persons over 18 years of age. The sale or transfer of this material to minors is strictly prohibited.

All content, within the pages of (yoursitename), is fully compliant with US Code, Title 18, Section 2257 (US Label Law). Click HERE (http://www.adultbouncer.com/usc2257.php) for details. All content is fully licensed for use on this website. Copyrights held by their respective owners. All models are 18 years of age or older.

This statement along with the 2257 (or "18 thingie") link should pretty much cover your bases. (insert breaks where needed) :wink:

Thanks mate, were just about to ask if i could copy those lines from your site ;)

Thanks again.

No prob...here to help. :wink:

[Aussiemade]

Well done Dred. "Thingie" :wink:

[babydred]

Well done Dred. "Thingie" :wink:

Thanks...i've surfed long enough and seen enough of these at the bottom of some of the top paysites...figured i'd combine a few lines to make the one i posted...pretty much covers everything...doesn't it. :D :wink: