site critique

[high55]

http://assmasterz.com

Be honest. Tell me what you think I can improve.

[Aussiemade]

http://assmasterz.com

Be honest. Tell me what you think I can improve.

Fistly, there's no way in the world I'd let my surfers go to a blank page of movie covers and expect they will join. If it were me, I'd open that link in a new window, just as you've done with your Nautica sample pic. I happen to think the covers idea is good ...... I've done something similar. I'd do a bit more of a sell though. If you're only going to show 40 or 60, or even 100 covers, you need to make sure your visitors know that there are over 750 titles available. I don't usually do this, but have a look at this page to see what I mean. Please uderstand though, I'm not trying to say what I'm doing is perfect, or that my page or site is anything to model your own on. http://www.downundermodels.com/covers/covers01.html

If you think about it, what does "Now playing in AB" mean to a visitor who probably has no idea who, or what AB is? Maybe you could rename that to something like "View Covers of just a few Movies you can access with your Membership". In a similar vein, you sell Arses? I'd be saying what's available in the Ass Store, Sex Aids etc, etc.

Your Naughtica preview, I'd show a better sample, and by that I mean a full size pic. "they're Bigger on the inside/Members area, Honest". :wink: (I'm not trying to say they're not, but your surfers might think like that). I'd even go as far as to prvide a 15 or 20 pic preview gallery of Her, just not show any of the more explicit Stuff.

That WATZ New link, is that really what you want it to do? Most of us spend a heap of time and effort getting people to our sites. I wouldn't have thought sending them somewhere else was a good idea. Have the link, by all means, but make it open in a new window.

You need a 2557 Compliance statement.

What's the difference between index2 and Movies2? Do you need both?

You don't have any preview clips, or Vidcaps. I think they're a Monty. (A must, a no brainer ....... You should have some). :D

If you're not going to have your menu viewable all the time, perhaps some "Top" tags would be a good idea?

Every day I find something else to add to my Site, so I know it's not perfect. I need a Menu system and a proper banner. Just haven't found anything I like yet. :cry: You seem to be heading in the right direction and I hope at least one of the Rubbish I've written is of some assistance.

[xpc]

[quote=high55]http://assmasterz.com

Be honest. Tell me what you think I can improve.

You need a 2557 Compliance statement.
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where would we find this?
do we need it?

[babydred]

[quote=high55]http://assmasterz.com

Be honest. Tell me what you think I can improve.

You need a 2557 Compliance statement.



where would we find this?
do we need it?

I have mine linked to AB's 2557 page. :wink: Simple copy and paste for me. :lol:

[D-XXX]

of course this is only my opinion

http://assmasterz.com/nowplaying.html - what does this page mean? you have the movies or does the AB network have them. i think it's a bit dishonest to put up those box covers if you dont have access to them. and if they are on AB then how do they go about finding one of them.

navigation at the top could use some animation - just to give some life to the page (not a big deal)

http://assmasterz.com/i/join.gif - that graphic just shows you took it from a site where the graphic was made for a white background so it looks horrible on a black background

the thumbs of the scenes could be tweaked a little better, possibly brightened
- you have super high quality large pics but then the thumbs to the movies are not up to par - kind of shows inconsistency

design wise maybe try and change that join gif to match your title. the more you fine tune your design the better and stronger your product will appear. Hell i create my own custom bullets to really add a kick to my archives plus i take it as a new adventure and it's not just about the sell because i will sell it's about learning skills as you go.

- that search box on the side looks out of place + i would alight left all the options so the radio buttons align. i know it's picky but i'm anal

- your join page all of a sudden changes in theme and color so it seems like you left the site. maybe put your title in somewhere or screen shot to help people feel at ease they havent left your site and reinforce the site and AB connection

- and i see you put up thumbs of other peoples archives on http://assmasterz.com/links.html - that Old Dirty Sanchez archive is mine. i guess i don't mind but i think it's curtious to let the site owner know that you're doing this. Because some people try and piggy back on the success of others.

not sure if this critique helps. i only give my opinion because everyone's vision is different. but good luck

[Aussiemade]

G'day XPC,

Yes, you need the Compliance Statement.

If you're only using AB content on your site, you only need point to the AB Statement, as Dred has done. If, however, you have any other content, which depicts nudity, then you need to have a Compliance Statement to cover off that content.

Your content provider MUST give you all ID and proof of age materials. If you have any content on your Site which you cannot support with proof of age and Photo ID, then you're in more Strife than Flash Gordon.

I'm not aiming this directly at you XPC, nor am I suggesting you don't have the required information. :D

[high55]

thanks to everyone for ur criticism. Im taking it all in and redesigning now.
8)

[xpc]

i dont have the info its all ab stuff so if there not 18 then oops on ab's part lol :lol:

anyways ill get that stuff up soon.