Help!

[xpc]

i need some help can you guys go to my web page and enter it and tell me if the page loads fast. it loads fast for me im on a cable modem but still i hope it loads fast for everyone else.i redid my site a little i think it looks better then what i had before. any comments on my site is ok.

http://xpc.adultbouncer.com


thanks

[Aussiemade]

G'day XPC,

Your Site takes a while to load and I'm on ADSL. I don't think it's anything to worry about though.

What I'd be more concerned with is the layout and supportive text. I don't mean to be harsh here, but your Spelling and Grammar isn't too flash.

Try something like this

Welcome to XPC your number 1 stop for full XXX DVD Movies.

Our Site is 56k friendly, as all Movies are split into file sizes which have been optimised for dial-up users. We do not compress our Movies, so you still get full DVD quality.

We update regularly and have new titles for you to download each month. We also cater to a wide range of Movie tastes.

Below are Vidcap previews of some of the Movies on this site. In addition to my site, when you sign up as a Member you gain access to the entire network of AdultBouncer sites, which offer over 6,900 gb of Explicit Sex, DVD quality Movies.

I'd suggest you need to tell a bit better story about what you have to offer, as well as what AB has to offer. Write a bit of a Story about the Movies you have on offer, and break the page up a bit.

Tell your visitors that their monthly Membership entitles them to download as many Movies as they want, or can, as that's an important point. Let them know there are Hundreds of Movies available and that they get access to ALL of them, as a Member.

Good Luck!
:D

[babydred]

Hey Aussiemade...i wonder how many "Just starting out", "First-time" webmasters just copy and pasted that sample mainpage intro you wrote for XPC. :lol:

Makes me wanna join and i work here. :lol:

[Aussiemade]

Hey Aussiemade...i wonder how many "Just starting out", "First-time" webmasters just copy and pasted that sample mainpage intro you wrote for XPC. :lol:

Makes me wanna join and i work here. :lol:

LOL

We all have to start somewhere and the things I've learnt from other AB Webmasters stands me in good stead. The better I am, the better the Network of AB Sites looks, so on and so forth. If we work together, we all benefit.

I've found AB Webmasters the most co-operative and Helpful Webmasters in the Biz!

[babydred]

Hey Aussiemade...i wonder how many "Just starting out", "First-time" webmasters just copy and pasted that sample mainpage intro you wrote for XPC. :lol:

Makes me wanna join and i work here. :lol:

LOL

We all have to start somewhere and the things I've learnt from other AB Webmasters stands me in good stead. The better I am, the better the Network of AB Sites looks, so on and so forth. If we work together, we all benefit.

I've found AB Webmasters the most co-operative and Helpful Webmasters in the Biz!

Psst...then you won't mind me "borrowing" a few of those lines? :lol:

[xpc]

G'day XPC,

Your Site takes a while to load and I'm on ADSL. I don't think it's anything to worry about though.

What I'd be more concerned with is the layout and supportive text. I don't mean to be harsh here, but your Spelling and Grammar isn't too flash.

Try something like this

Welcome to XPC your number 1 stop for full XXX DVD Movies.

Our Site is 56k friendly, as all Movies are split into file sizes which have been optimised for dial-up users. We do not compress our Movies, so you still get full DVD quality.

We update regularly and have new titles for you to download each month. We also cater to a wide range of Movie tastes.

Below are Vidcap previews of some of the Movies on this site. In addition to my site, when you sign up as a Member you gain access to the entire network of AdultBouncer sites, which offer over 6,900 gb of Explicit Sex, DVD quality Movies.

I'd suggest you need to tell a bit better story about what you have to offer, as well as what AB has to offer. Write a bit of a Story about the Movies you have on offer, and break the page up a bit.

Tell your visitors that their monthly Membership entitles them to download as many Movies as they want, or can, as that's an important point. Let them know there are Hundreds of Movies available and that they get access to ALL of them, as a Member.

Good Luck!
:D


thanks i now it might load a little slow but it shouldnt be that bad yeah i need to work on that i should add a lot more to it thanks for the suggestions.

[Aussiemade]

Psst...then you won't mind me "borrowing" a few of those lines? :lol:

Go for your life Mate, it's nothing new or all that special.

[Movie Guy]

"we do not compress our movies" <- for obvious reasons, xpc doesn't use that line anymore and neither should anyone unless they plan on putting up the actual VOB's. ;)

[Aussiemade]

"we do not compress our movies" <- for obvious reasons, xpc doesn't use that line anymore and neither should anyone unless they plan on putting up the actual VOB's. ;)

Good point, however in the Context of XPC's Site and what He's trying to say, it does leave the door Open for that kind of comment to be OK.

AB Compress them when they convert them, but XPC doesn't compress them. The reason that was put there was so there would be no confusion around the 56k Friendly thing. We cut them into smaller bits, but don't compress them any further. Seems fair to me. :D

[xpc]

thanks Aussiemade
your are a lot of help i used what you wrote i changed a few words hope you dont mind

[Aussiemade]

i used what you wrote i changed a few words hope you dont mind

G'day XPC,

No problems at all Mate. What I write and what you want to say are two different things. :D It's your Site, and if the example helped you make improvements you're happy with, then it's all good.

[xpc]

is it better to open my images on my page directly in the window or as a pop up window?

[dajm]

is it better to open my images on my page directly in the window or as a pop up window?

I'd say directly in the window, since many people have not-so-good popup blockers that blocks even the popups you want to see, and legit popup or not, they're still annoying imho :lol:

[xpc]

can you guys recheck my page i shrunk the thumbs smaller it should load faster. tell me if its still slow.